A resource and record for A2 Media students creating short films.
Monday 8 February 2010
General Feedback on Commentaries
I enjoyed reading your commentaries and have given you all feedback on your scripts. Here are some general comments to help you improve:
Sound engaged--discuss the decisions making involved
Relate your doc to others
Be more specific
Discuss codes, signifiers, connotations more often.
More on locations (impact on audience)
More on editing!
Phrases:
• This is a typical convention of documentary and often used when ________________
• ____________ was inspired by ___________ (name, year)
• We subverted the conventions by __________________. Whereas most documentaries ______________, we _____________.
• This highlights what we see as the purpose of documentary.
Sound engaged--discuss the decisions making involved
Be more specific
Discuss codes, signifiers, connotations more often.
More on locations (impact on audience)
More on editing!
Phrases:
• This is a typical convention of documentary and often used when ________________
• ____________ was inspired by ___________ (name, year)
• We subverted the conventions by __________________. Whereas most documentaries ______________, we _____________.
• This highlights what we see as the purpose of documentary.
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