General Feedback on Commentaries
I enjoyed reading your commentaries and have given you all feedback on your scripts. Here are some general comments to help you improve:
Sound engaged--discuss the decisions making involved
Relate your doc to others
Be more specific
Discuss codes, signifiers, connotations more often.
More on locations (impact on audience)
More on editing!
Phrases:
• This is a typical convention of documentary and often used when ________________
• ____________ was inspired by ___________ (name, year)
• We subverted the conventions by __________________. Whereas most documentaries ______________, we _____________.
• This highlights what we see as the purpose of documentary.
Welcome to Dunraven Documentary
Use this blog let us know about the progress of your group--from the pitch to the finished product. Be sure to make regular entries, because this will be used to assess your final planning mark. You can also use the blog get audience feeback on your ideas along the way. Good luck.
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